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Monday, February 7, 2011

Flying

Abundance
Without worries
They come to take
But giving is nonexistent
Is knowledge there?

Lesser
Without woe
I sing to tell
But my voice is still small
Is winning unattainable?

Gone
Without warning
We struggle to thrive
But our future is not there
Are we finally lost?

And now, it seems
That fleeing
Is our only hope
Of flying

2 comments:

  1. Firstly: not "which never actually happened." change it to "Hasnt happened yet but will happen this break if we're all free."
    Secondly: This poem is beautiful! You used really strong words and stuff :D
    Thirdly: FINALLY you posted so i can comment on it!

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  2. Janee this poem is really amazing, knowing you (if I'm right) I know what you must be talking about a lot in this poem.
    Great wording too
    Love youu

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